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What We Can Do to Help Disabled People Although the medical science is well developed in recent years, there are still large amounts of disabled people live around us. Of which,some are blind, some are deaf or whatever else. Their disability makes them live in a difficult situation which is absolutely different from us. So, it is the high time for us to help the disabled people. In the first place, we can give financial help to them. As we all know, many disabled people are poor. They can't find a job for their disability. Therefore, we can donate our money, old clothes or some commodities to them. In the second place, we can give them help in daily life. For example, we can help them to cross the street when they are in the street,we can give our seat to them when we meet the disabled in a bus, we can do housework for them as well. What's more, the most important thing that we can do to help the disabled is to respect them. We should treat the disabled equally as the normal instead of discriminating them. In addition, we can also call on our friends to help them. All in all, we can do a lot to help the disabled. I believe that if everyone can give a little help to them, the world will be much better.
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