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1998年专四作文真题:One way to solve the problem

发布时间:2013-05-15 01:01浏览次数:2118
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Direction:It is now generally accepted that vehicles (cars, trucks, etc.) are a major source of air pollution in cities. Your are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem:One way to solve the problem
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Time management----A Lesson I Have Learned at College I have been at college for one and a half years,and an important lesson I have learned is how to manage my time effectively. In my first semester at college,with so much free time,I manage it unwisely. I have never been to the library to study. What's worse,I spent lots of time in sleeping and watching TV. So at the end of the semester,I felt I have learned nothing. Back at home in the winter vacation,I was ashamed of myself when I found my friends lived a meaningful college life. Some of them studied hard every day,some friends took a part-time job,and some participated in a student society. They all made their college life colorful,but what have I done? With so much time I have wasted,I determined to manage my time wisely. In the following semester,I usually go to the library to study. What's more,I take a part-time job as well as my friends. I take full advantage of my free time. Of course,I also take a part of time to relax myself. I learned the importance of time management.

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