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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

In today's word there is normal make a first impression to a man through their appearance, but most times we will find it often lead us make some mistakes or hurt others. There are many resons for us to show that it's unwise to judge a person by their appearance.First,the appearance is only a part of a person,not representative the total about a people,a man who don't have a good appearance,may have a very nice heart and character.Second,the appearance can't dicide by ourselves,it was descided when we bron,and it out of our contorl,judging one person through a unatificial conditions is very ridiculousness. Therefore,we should take care of their inherent when we judge a men

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