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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

用户练习作文:

In today's word there is normally the first impression to a man through their appearance, but most times we will find it often lead us to make some mistakes or hurt others. There are many reasons for us to show that it's unwise to judge a person by their appearance.First,the appearance is only a part of a person,not means the total about a person, a man who doesn't have a good appearance, may have a very nice heart and character.Second, the appearance can't decide by ourselves, it was decided when we brone, and it out of our control,judging one person through an unartificial condition is very ridiculousness. Therefore, we should focus on their inherent when we judge a person.

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