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2006年6月英语四级作文真题:招募志愿者

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:31浏览次数:1905
要求:
An announcement for a voluntary program:     
1、校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动,现招募志愿者   
2、本次志愿者活动的目的,内容,安排等    
3、报名联系方式 
用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Our school based student union will organize a volunteer activity on summer vacation.Attending the volunteer activity is meaningful, it not only can enrich our summer vacation life, but also can help others and acquire some knowledge or skills which are outside of your textbooks. So, do you want to join us, come on! The aim of the volunteer activity is spreading some environmental knowledge to others to protest our earth. During the activity, we need you to come back to our school about two weeks. And then we will adapt different ways to spread our environmental concept, like doing some environmental questionnaire survey in the streets ,playing some environmental games. If you have minds to protest our environment, if you want to improve yourself, if you want to spend a meaningful summer vacation, join us! we need you!

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