英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71643
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

文章层次较为清晰;词汇稍欠丰富,且拼写错误比较多;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

As we know,bejing is the most suitable place if you want to know about china.there is capital in my country and have many museum to help you understand the history of china. I definitely will take you to the imperial palace and The greatwall,because this places can represent of china's history.the imperial palace is the king's house and have more two thousands history.every emperor living in there,work in there,and dead. And another place is the greatwall.I supposed a lot of people knew about this.the greatwall not only located in bejing,but also in hebei,henan and so on.it's the world cultural heritage sites. China is beautiful and have many traditional things and interesting place.Under my guide,I take you to know about bejing,but it's just a little place in my country,if you want to know more about china,i will to show you.

会员评论0个评论)
zoenee
金币:4

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.0coco99400

人气:86发布:2016-12-22

得分:88.5aixuexi1234

人气:26发布:2016-06-06

得分:88.5shymsky

人气:44发布:2016-11-16

得分:88.0Chrisinny

人气:77发布:2014-10-09

得分:88.02011213045

人气:75发布:2015-04-21