2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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As we know,Bejing is the most suitable place if you want to know about China.there is capital in my country and have many museum to help you understand the history of china. I definitely will take you to the imperial palace and The greatwall,because this places can represent of China's history.the imperial palace is the king's house and have more two thousands history.every emperor living in there,work in there,and dead. And another place is Great Wall of China.I supposed a lot of people knew about this.The Great Wall not only located in Bejing,but also in Hebei,Henan and so on.it's the world cultural heritage sites. China is beautiful and have many traditional things and interesting place.Under my guide,I take you to know about Bejing,but it's just a little place in my country,if you want to know more about China,i will to show you.