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May 31, 2016 fine Tuesday Today I got up early. After breakfast, I helped mom with some housework. Then I did my homework, first English, then math. Mom had told us that today were grandmother’s birthday, so we would attend her birthday party. I could not wait for that, how excited it would be! At 9:30 we left home for grandmothers’. When we got there, there are already so many persons, friends, relatives, it was really busy there. We enjoyed ourselves very much. We got home at 6 o’clock. In the evening I watched TV with my family, and then I prepared my next day’s work. I went to sleep at ten. What a busy day today!