文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练。
I have a good friend .She is very nice.She is not very tall ,but she has a good figur.She does exercise every day .She loves all kinds sports ,like hiking,playing tennis and swimming or so.She likes fashion .she likes to wear all kinds of hats.she often says "A good hat makes her more happy !"she often take part in social activities as volunteer ,helping people . I like to be with her,for she always make me happy.