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Every coin has two sides. Putting all your eggs in one baseket, likely, has both advantages and disadvantages. Yet, in my opinion, the disadvantages of putting all eggs in one basket far outweight its advantages. Thus, it never too careul to always have plan B when we cope with important events. Nobady can know what is going to happen in the future. When unexpected accidents happened, you would find you in a seperated situation, losing everything you have. Putting all your have in one thing equal to putting all the risks and pressures together. That is why we need to think about all possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events. In other words, we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results. In conslusion, it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket. That is because this may give risks to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disoppointed and annoyed. Therefore, we assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.
