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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Every coin has two sides. Putting all your eggs in one basket, likely, has both advantages and disadvantages. Yet, in my opinion, the disadvantages of putting all eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantages. Thus, it never too careful to always have plan B when we cope with important events. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future. When unexpected accidents happened, you would find you in a desperate situation, losing everything you have. Putting all your have in one thing equal to putting all the risks and pressures together. That is why we need to think about all possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events. In other words, we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results. In conslusion, it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket. That is because this may give risks to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed. Therefore, we assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.
