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2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:04浏览次数:5174
要求:
题目 网络的近与远(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning
2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

大体意思:

网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?


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评语:

文中词汇使用灵活,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵。

用户练习作文:

Dipcted in the cartoon is a noteworthy yet attentive phnomnon in which people from all walks of life,sitting their own chambers that sparate with each other,are involved into the Internet,comunicating with his/her aquaintances only by the"fingers".while traditional forms of interpersonal comunication-such as writing a evlopment to friends,giving a call with familiers,having a overnight talking with a ladybros-still play a role in our daily life,we today seems inclinded to expoit the alternative forms of communication:Internet. Is it on earth overall elevating or poisonous to our society?Oberviously,about 2 decades ago,we had no alternative but to give a call to the counterparts if we were intended to express our emotion.Thanks to the mushrooming expansion of the information technology(IT),this process has becomed fabulously convenient compare to 20 years ago.It seems that the Internet,like a spring,shorten the distance of humans,but few people have observed the side-effect of it:the hypocracy among humans is on the rise. We now live in a society in which the soft-ware of smart-phone is pervasive:a coulp of youngsters who are sentting the massages to the other by the Tiwtter;two close friendes who are talking at the Myspace;even a child who are sentting the massages with his parents by his iChat account.these messages,unfortunately,are always unconsciously sented by them who are click the keyboard even without any thinking about it. As a result,the triditional forms of comunication as the ways of combining with people is probably overlooked in our daily life.Instead,the Internet,which has shorten the distance bewteen people if we make reasonable use of it,is essential to our life.Such,then,is the way things stand:on the left angry critics,on the right stupid supporters,and in the middle,naturally,the majority of taking advantage of the Internet trying to get on in life.

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