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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33544
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分46.5分
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;建议平时练习中,多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

用户练习作文:

The model life,everything to price.The people just has little many in us hand.They like things that them don't can spend .But sometime still people can't help to buy.Just like this only lead clear many. anyway,my is one of them.It seems that world many thing wait for me to buy .It is a fact that i'm not many,but,i'm not stop in there,i will do it.because,want many still work power.I hope one day i can take my many to buy everything ,don't worry ,clear many,I can take my many go trip,went to every other country .I can take my many to help everyone. I can use my many let my family live a good life. So,I don't need saving money,i just need keep my nice life now.

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