题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,注意文中少数拼写错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
In nowadays, people use computer more and more. Computer and Man become a social problem. How should we deal with the balance of computer and man? We often use computer to work, do our homework and so on. We can read news , search engine. It makes our life more convidence. However