2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

Enthusiasm drives you forward Once there’s a remark of great Einstein “I have no special talent. I am just passionately curious.” An outstanding man of history who contributed a lot to the development of human use his curiosity to change the world, then why can’t we? Saints used to say that every one was born equal, we are of the same level when we come to the world, and the complicated circumstances around built us, that is to say everyone could be Einstein if you make yourself in the right way. And the key point is as he said—enthusiasm. On the first place, life is a process full of posibility, every thing could happen, if you dare to think about it, and put into practice. Only with enthusiasm that can drive you forward, besides it’s where motivation and encouragement come from. On the second place, if you are pessimistic about your life, you may probably run out of energy at the early stage, since there no points to go on with a shabby, broken heart. Last but not least, with enthusiasm, you would feel that every day is a happening day, everything’s full of challenges and also chances, you will have come to a completely new world. In a word, enthusiasm is a independent part of our daily life, only with it, can we life a fruitful life.