句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Drawing conclutions from what you see and what you hear is truly unreasonable, my dear friends. In our real life, for the reason that we believe what our eyes and ears are telling us, from time to time we misunderstand people close to us. Nevertheless, the parts of our body may treat on us, which is similar to some sope operas, the man and woman break up for seeing or hearing something turn out to be a fake.What a pity! It occurred to me an experience happened to me at the time when i was 8. Accidently, i bumped into a conversation my mom had with my brother, she told my brother that she didn't give birth to my brother and me. hearing this, i scared to death and cried out loud. Mom found me and amusingly, she couldn't help laughing. she explained that it was just a joke on my brother. Only then did i stop crying. In sum up, my dear friends, you ought not to judge to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. Not just because it may be not true, but because you should keep strong faith in people you love!
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