2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者能较准确地使用高级词汇，不过存在个别拼写错误。

Han dynasty was one of the longest exsistance dynasties in chinese history,it was established in 202 BC, and be divided into two part:the Western Han and the Eastern Han. Han dynasty was called as the golden times, for it has created glorous culture in vary fact, such as (correct:considered a golden age,Han Dynasty created a glorious civilization in various aspects,including economy, culture,art as well as science and technology, ect.) Han Dynasty made an fundation of chinese nation's cluture, the theory of confucianism was dedicated by Han Dynasty became the main steam of chinese thought. In the Western Dynasty, the business was prosperity, The Silk Road was contacted is a significant example.