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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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Han dynasty was one of the longest existence dynasties in Chinese history,it was established in 202 BC, and was divided into two part:the Western Han and the Eastern Han. Han dynasty was called as the golden times, for it has created glorious culture in various facts, such as (correct:considered a golden age,Han Dynasty created a glorious civilization in various aspects,including economy, culture, art as well as science and technology, ect.) Han Dynasty made a fundation of Chinese nation's culture, the theory of confucianism was dedicated by Han Dynasty became the main steam of Chinese thought. In the Western Dynasty, the business was prosperity, The Silk Road was contacted is a significant example.

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