2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误。

Suppose my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,I will take him to three places.First,I will take him to my home and eat dinner with my family.Because he is my friend and first to my home.Second,I will take him to visit interest of places from my hometown.Because I want to let him feel culture of my hometown.Third,I will take him to do some interesting game.Because it can let him happy.