文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;把握下长难句在文中的分布;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
My good friend is a tall boy with bright eyes and a black hair. he often wears a cool shoes and a short jeans. He likes eating and sleeping so that many people say he is a pig. he likes reading and planting. he has many books in his book desk and many plant in his room. he likes learning English and Math, since in his mind he thinks the two subjects are too interesting so that he pour more and more attention in them and he gets good grades in them.