采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。
The tallest, and the thinnest, as well the smartest is my friend's statistic. Books are his life and he spends more spare reading in the library or bookstore even if forgetting having supper and the sleeping. There is a book room in his house so that it is the easiest for him to sleep on the books. Taking photos is one thing he likes since he wants to show his beauty to all friends and share his mood to them.