作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
The tallest, and the thinnest, as well the smartest is my friend's statistic. Books are his life and he spends more spare reading in the library or bookstore even if forgetting having supper and the sleeping. There is a book room for him to sleep on the books in his home. Taking photos is one thing he likes since he wants to show his beauty to all friends and share his mood to them.