采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章用词太过单一,注意少数拼写错误;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。
I have a good friend,she is Tianli. we are together to study and to play in high school.whit the development of firendship,we are become more and more friendly.we are don't leave each other.but we are angry each other sometimes.finally,we are leave each other now,because we are study in college.we are little communication,I free that i lose my good friend.