小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

I have a good friend,she is Tianli . we are together to study and to play in high school .with the development of friendship , we become more and more friendly . we don't leave each other .but we are angry each other sometimes .finally , we leave each other now,because we are studying in college.we are little communication ,I free that i lose my good friend .