小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；简单句偏多，应增加从句使用。

I have a good friend,she is Tianli . We are together to study and to play in high school.With the development of friendship , We become more and more friendly . We don't leave each other .But we are angry each other sometimes .Finally , we leave each other now,because we are studying in college.we are little communication ,I free that i lose my good friend .