小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；简单句偏多，应增加从句使用。

I have a good friend,she is Tianli. We are together to study and to play in high school. With the development of friendship, We become more and more friendly. We don't leave each other. But we are angry each other sometimes. Finally, we leave each other now,because we are studying in college.we are little communication ,I free that i lose my good friend .