Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to date provided by Bureau Of Labor Statistics,we can make a conclusion that people who are under the higher education earn more than whom get less.We can also say that education decide earning. As we can see over the form above,the average Unemployment rate in 2011 is 7.6%,and the unemployment rate is lower as the degree gets higher.The average Median weekly earnings is $797 in 2011,and people who are in higher degrees earn more than who are in lower degrees every week. The education play a very important role in our life,we need to pay more attention in the education career.And the government should do more to ensure all the citizen's right to accept education.That is the best way to increase the Unemployment rate and make people earn more.