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On Excessive Packaging With the growing increasingly of the commodity economy, commodity packaging is more and more popular in order to attract peole. While the phennomenon of excessive packaging is not a good thing to customers. Now many goods are packaged which people will feel better when they send them.It also can make people proud when they accept gifts with very beautiful and large packaging. So the excessive packaging is emeraging. It is undenied that the packaging is changing the destination of shopping. But there are also some defects.To begin with, excessive packaging can make people misunderstand easily whether the quality is good or not. People may concentrate energy on package rather than the quality and ptatical. In addition, excessive packaging increase the value of the commodities so people should pay more than the commodities' themslves value. To sum up, excessive pachaging is not good for comsumers.