2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

On Excessive Packaging With the growing increasingly of the commodity economy, commodity packaging is more and more popular in order to attract people. While the phenomenon of excessive packaging is not a good thing to customers. Now many goods are packaged which people will feel better when they send them.It can also make people proud when they accept gifts with very beautiful and large packaging. So the excessive packaging is emeraging. It is undenied that the packaging is changing the destination of shopping. But there are also some defects.To begin with, excessive packaging can make people misunderstand easily whether the quality is good or not. People may concentrate energy on package rather than the quality and practical. In addition, excessive packaging increases the value of the commodities so people should pay more than the commodities' themselves value. To sum up, excessive pachaging is not good for consumers.