高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My home In the past, my home town surround by tree. The fish is playing in the clear river. The house is simple, the street is narrow. Nowadays, there are all kinds of high building and factory, big or little car run in the street. The industry developement enviromeng got wrong, the tree induce and the fish vanish. process Pollution is the first aim.