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Getting the answers immediately Nowadays,most of us would like to get the answers immediately,and we are also asked to answer the question as soon as possiable.But,It is unwise for us to have answers whatever we saw or heard. Around of us,there are rare people who are answerring questions after thinking carefully,neither our parents nor our teachers.Today,it is not right for us to do something without thinking.For example,we always heard somethings bad about someone or something,the old words said:bad things runs quickily,so,a great number of people thought or said that was bad,without thinking competly. No matter what we heard or saw,we should not get the answers immediately without thinking,we should distinguish something carefully after someone told us something.
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