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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
With the sacial of development,the electronic communication is play the part of more and more important role,the effect is involve in our life,the number of people is increase so fast around all over the world , then the face-to-face contact is lacking,a number of people will choose intnet to keep up with friends and parents,the way is popular to use by people,but there is no doubt that l think electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact. on the one hand,the face-to-face contact will give you more show loving care for by our parents and friends,because the net is full of false information we can't to distinguish,on the other hand,the face-to-face contact can make us to know the other enough as forth on.
