单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;从句使用不熟练;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Helen is going to write a letter to little blind girls. Helen and teacher are going to visit little blind girls. Helen and teacher are going to Boston by steam train. Helen will have fun and speak by fingers with blind girls. Helen is going to see MrXX. Mrxx Will love Helen and kiss Helen. Helen will go to class with blind girls. Helen could read and spell and count just like blind girls. M could not go to Boston, and she had cried. XX and XX will go to Boston too. Dad had shot duck with his gun and the duck fell into the water. XX and XX jumped into water and picked the duck up to dad. Helen played with the dog, and was riding with teacher. Helen fed XX. Teacher was whipping XX to make it run faster. But Helen could see nothing. Helen will put the letter into the envelope to blind girls.