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We have been lived in XX street for almost ten years and we have a beautiful house. I have a great number of friends here, and they always visit my home and play with me. Here I would like to describe my house to you. The color of the house is white outside. There are two floors with eight rooms including the kitchen, living room, bathroom and bedrooms. When you come into the house through the magnificent gate, you will see a wonderful landscape painting hang on the wall of the living room. A TV is underneath the picture. The TV in put on a set of TV bench. Not far away, there has a table, and a set of sofa. Our parlor is very big. Next to the living room is my parent’s bedroom, it is larger than mine, there have a desk under the window, some books and newspapers are put on it, sometimes my father will reading on it. There also have a big double bed, a toilet table is not far from the bed. My bedroom is on the second floor, the color of the wall is pink, the curtain is pink, the sheet and quilt are pink, and my desk is pink too. Because pink is my favorite color. My desk is under the window, and there are some books and pens on the desk. My lovely Pink bed is not far from the window, there are some shoes under the bed. There are some wardrobes in my room, they are next to the bed. There are some clothes on the wardrobe. And I have a bookcase in my room, the bookcase is on the left of the window, I like reading very much and I have plenty of books. There is a picture above the bookcase, the picture is of my friends and me. My bedroom is so nice, I really like it!
