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We have been lived in XX street for almost ten years and we have a beautiful house. I have a great number of friends here, and they always visit my home and play with me. Here I would like to describe my house to you. The color of the house is white outside. There are two floors with eight rooms including kitchen, living room, bathroom and bedrooms. When you come into the house through the magnificent gate, you will see a wonderful landscape painting on the wall of the living room. A TV is underneath the picture. The TV is put on the cabinet. Not far away, there is a table, and a set of sofa. Our parlor is very big. Next to the living room is my parent’s bedroom, it is larger than mine, there is a desk under the window, some books and newspapers are put on it, sometimes my father will reading on it. There also is a big double bed which is near the window, a toilet table is not far from the bed. My bedroom is on the second floor, and the color of the wall is pink, the curtain is pink, the sheet and quilt are pink, and my desk is pink too, because pink is my favorite color. My desk is under the window, and there are some books and pens on the desk. My lovely Pink bed is not far from the window, there are some shoes under the bed. There are some wardrobes in my room, and they are next to the bed. There are some clothes on the wardrobe. And I have a bookcase in my room, the bookcase is on the left of the window, I like reading very much and I have plenty of books. There is a picture above the bookcase, the picture is of my friends and me. My bedroom is so nice, I really like it!
