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As we all know, the effects of peer pressure can change our attitude towards life. Sometimes, it can be positive or negative, depends on how we react to it. the consequence of peer pressure is something we can choose. First and foremost, influence of positive peer pressure can promote us to get progress. For instance, I got bad grade on my first exam of math, but my friend got a B, I felt embarrass since I did not study hard. From then on, I study harder, and have been getting better grades. As the result, I get better grade because of peer pressure. On the other hand, negative peer pressure may lead us to lose something important. For example, some students do not go to class occasionally, other students think it is allowed. It became an excuse for students to be absent. Then, the student fall behind and withdraw from a class .Thus, the peer pressure creates negative results. Thus it can be seen, peer pressure can lead to two different outcomes. We should always try avoid peer pressure that lead to negative result.
