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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
As we all know, the effects of peer pressure can change our attitude towards life. Sometimes, the effects of peer pressure have two effects, which are positiveness and negativeness. Whatever this effect is positiveness or negativeness, the consequence always following the effect. First and foremost, influence of positive pressure will promote us to get progress. For instance, I got bad grade of math in my first exam, but my friend got B, I felt embarrass since I did not study hard. From then on, I always study hard , owing to the grade. As the result, influence of positive is connecting the effects of peer pressure. The opposite as you thought, impact of negative pressure will let us to lose something important. For example, some students they do not go to class occasionally, which impacted the other student, especially those students who thinks the class difficult, they break away and drop the class . Personally , I comprehend some class is not easy by understanding ,but we should attempt before we do that. Thus it can be seen, influence of positive pressure and impact of negative have totally different result. Following the influence of positive pressure is very useful for us to look forward our goal.
