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Xiamen-A place you will never forget! Xiamen is the most beautiful city in China.And have you ever been to Xiamen?It is a wonderful and safe place to take a holiday. Have you ever tried delicious food in Xiamen?One great thing about Xiamen is that you'll find as much local food as you like here.Whether you like Sichuan food, Beijing food or Taiwan food,you will find it all in Xiamen. I have tried lots of food in Xiamen such as Shacha noodles,Zongzi and fried sea oysters.They're the most delicious food I have ever tasted.I just couldn't believe my mouth when I ate so many special foods. There are many kinds of islands in Xiamen,but have you ever been to the Gulangyu Island?It is the most popular for visitors.I have been there twice.And the sea is big like the sky. When you walking around the sea,you will feel so relaxing.When you playing at the beach, you will like a child. There are many stores selling all kinds of special things on the island.If you have a chance to Xiamen,you should never miss it! The temperature in Xiamen is almost the same all year round.So you can choose to go whenever you like--spring,summer,autumn or winter. Welcome to Xiamen.I believe there is something for everyone here.
