小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，另外请重视拼写检查。

june ，my friend， is very good student ，he often does housework to help his parents ，he study English very well ，our friendship is very well ，we all like reading. we often went fish by the river，we often camp together。he is honest man ，he is benifit for me，I hope my friendship to keep longer