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people all have a question ,they believe what they have seen or hearing . sometimes ,it is true that what they have learnt or hearing.but dependent on that is not conviencent. today,in china have a saying "what you have seen is true ,what you have hearing is untrue",this proverb is untrue sometimes .from TV,wo can see mistakes often come from the leader role's see and hearing. you can see a litter video in the internate,in the movie you can see a man give a high evaluate to the picture what a woman was doing.but the women didn't give any thanks to the man.in this situation,we will make a decision that the woman don't polite,but in the next time ,you will find that the woman is a mute ,you will feel apologize to the woman. so ,don't make any judge just from what you have seen or hearing ,it's look like real pale and lose the learnt of more.
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