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If a foreign friend of mind is going to visit my hometown, the most interesting place place I would like to take hime to see is Xinxing-Longshan. There is no doubt doubt, as the birthplace of Huineng, Longshan is the best place for me to introduce him to the culture of my hometown. In Longshan, we can see many temple standing here, which is imperical and respectde by the majority of locate people. Moreover, surrounded with forest and different plants, Longshan was favored by it comfortable climate and clear air. Letting him to know about my hometown culture can develop our friendship, what's more, as a located person ,I have something more to tell he, which can build up my good manners and deep comprehensive of my culture.
