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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5523
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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How should parents help children to be independent Actully, especially in China, this is real issue for all parents, everthing in china is developing so fast especially in economy. the parents wants to give the best things , the great things to their chidren, in that case it's easy spoil children. here are some tips I sammuried to help children to be imdependent. 1. Do not leave your children to live with his/her grandma, you should now that it's needed children brought up with their mother ,grandma tend to satisfay what children want to, this will spoil children and give the signal for children to find grand ma if they need help. 2. whatever age the children is, Please ask and guid children to help you do the house work, no matter thing is too tiny. 3. always give your children an encourage to do more working. even only help you to move a chair.

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