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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71643
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章衔接手法恰当;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

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Suzhou is a beautiful city with the long history that also called a city on Water. There are innumerable bridges in it. Small and big bridges spread all over the city where you can find various kind of bridges everywhere. Some are ancient and some are modern. It is famous all over the world. They have different forms. However, what is the most famous among the city is not the bridges, but gardens. As an old Chinese saying, the garden of Suzhou's is the most beautiful than other place's under the sky. Zuozhen Yuan is the biggest and most prominent between a lot of gardens. The people of Suzhou often say if you have come to Suzhou, but you don't visit it, you are equal to never come here. Zuozhen Yuan is divided into four parts, and each of them represents a different season, and it is Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter respectively. Walking around the neat paths, you may see different scenery in one season in it.

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