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Suzhou is a beautiful city with the long history that also called a city on Water. There are innumerable bridges in it. Small and big bridges spread all over the city where you can find various kind of bridges everywhere. Some are ancient and some are modern. It is famous all over the world. They have different forms. However, what is the most famous among the city is not the bridges, but gardens. As an old Chinese saying, the garden of Suzhou's is the most beautiful than other place's under the sky. Zuozhen Yuan is the biggest and most prominent between a lot of gardens. The people of Suzhou often say if you have come to Suzhou, but you don't visit it, you are equal to never come here. Zuozhen Yuan is divided into four parts, and each of them represents a different season, and it is Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter respectively. Walking around the neat paths, you may see different scenery in one season in it.