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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5742
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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全文结构较为严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

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Nowadays,with the development of the science and technology.we are fortunate to live in a information age that bring considerable convenience to us.however,there are increasingly people complain that they are lost in the information age. Adnittedly,new information age has brought us so much of convenience that we are allowed to get plenty of information just with a simple click sitting in front of the computer.On the contrary,we are also lost ourself in the information age.for instence,we may be puzzled by all kinds of irrelevant when we want to search some information we need.besides,the internet exsists numerous harmful information. therefore,what can we do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.here are some advices.firstly,make a list of what you really want before you searching.you czn avoid some appealing yet irrelevant information in this way.secondly,find some professional sources or websites.in this way,you can easily leave some useless iinformation.

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