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Nowadays,with the development of the science and technology.we are fortunate to live in a information age that bring considerable convenience to us.however,there are increasingly people complain that they are lost in the information age. Adnittedly,new information age has brought us so much of convenience that we are allowed to get plenty of information just with a simple click sitting in front of the computer.On the contrary,we are also lost ourself in the information age.for instence,we may be puzzled by all kinds of irrelevant when we want to search some information we need.besides,the internet exsists numerous harmful information. therefore,what can we do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.here are some advices.firstly,make a list of what you really want before you searching.you czn avoid some appealing yet irrelevant information in this way.secondly,find some professional sources or websites.in this way,you can easily leave some useless iinformation.