小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积。

My new teacher is a old women, she teach us chinese. I think she is very fat and old, she has a few hair and small eyes. She is not kind because she is not care of poor student and also be careful our homework, she just take your B or C, she can not tell us that where am I wrong, that was indignant I hate she. But in the end she just teached us about two years, so I think is good.