托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第40篇:你认为那些有名的运动员或消遣者理应挣高薪吗

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Nowadays some athletes and stars earn much more than normal worker.Someone said it was unfair that they earn so much while others earn so little during the same work hours.They shouldn't be paid so much.I disagree with that opinion. The most important is that they earn money legally.Athletes and stars they earn their money through their own hard work under the same law which we all must obey.In order to win or performance well they spend a lot of time and energy practice and prepare.They work hard of course they deserve high salary and they didn't break the law why they can't get the high salary? Someone may say we know they earn their money legally but they earn too much.Well in my opinion it is the marketing's choice.It is people's choice.People love to watch some sport as the result the relativity sport man earn more.If they don't like the sport that sport man wouldn't earn much.Similar to movie and music stars.It's the audiance choice who will make the big money. Compare to normal workers.Even in the same company people's earn are different.Someone earn a lot and someone earn little.So it is not surprise athletes and stars earn more than normal workers.If you don't satisfactory with your salary,change a work or position may help. Indeed some athletes and stars earn much.Some people say they should devote their money to the poor people.This is wrong.If a country's poor people can't afford the basic service is not the rich people's fault.It is the country's fault.It is a country's duty to provide safety to all his people.It's not the rich people's fault. No pains no gains.As long as athletes and stars earn their money through work and legally.We should respect their working.So i think athletes and stars deserve high salary.