2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦162:Sunday

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误。

Todayday is sunday,the wheather is sunny. last sunday,my mother and me went shopping to buy a new clothes.when we pass a school ,we saw then students of Grade One was playing football,then,a boy draw my attention,he is a disable boy, he couldn not play football ,but he want to play football very much ,then many students to play with him