熟练使用了一些长难句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强,且注意拼写错误。
Nowsdays,the air pollution become wrose and wrose,and there is the haze weather in many cities in china,it make people uncontinue. I think that we should do some things to protect our environment .Firstly,we can take the public bus instead of driving;secondly we can ride bike to work ,it's a good way to protect our environmrent.