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句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of necessary guidance and supervision, so we can never figure out the fact that nowadays the youngests are excessive dependent on their parents which involve in making conclusions, plans and even chilaren's every thing. Children should be independent inorder to adopt the cahnging of the world. So parents should do the following things.To begain with, children should finish their home work and daily life working by themselves. Parents should not interacte. In addition, parents should let children concentrate their mind and thought on the thing in which they are engaged and like . Last but not least, children have their own thoughts, so parents should let children come up with their conclusions. To sum up, though parents play an important role in the period of children's growth, children must face some difficulties alone. So only parents let children go, can children deal with some problems correctely and confidently.
