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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10533
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分54.0分
评语:

作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度,部分句子有错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,另外还需加强拼写检查。

用户练习作文:

Recently, dialects was used in some public place. Somebody can not accept it. But in my point, use dialects in public was acceptable. The following reason can surpport my point. Firstly, Public words can express most meanings. But in some specially point only Dialects able to express some meaning specifixly. Secondly, words are always change with time. we should have a heart which called concern. otherwise, Dialects can make funny in some unnerd public place. Conclusion, dialects should acceptable in public place but in some important place we also need only use the public words.

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