作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度,部分句子有错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,另外还需加强拼写检查。
Recently, dialects was used in some public place. Somebody can not accept it. But in my point, use dialects in public was acceptable. The following reason can surpport my point. Firstly, Public words can express most meanings. But in some specially point only Dialects able to express some meaning specifixly. Secondly, words are always change with time. we should have a heart which called concern. otherwise, Dialects can make funny in some unnerd public place. Conclusion, dialects should acceptable in public place but in some important place we also need only use the public words.